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Hi my dear fellows. In my project which will be soon available on Steam, I display some sentences as a tutorial. Each first levels has its own explanation, just to introduce some new element or behavior. I am trying to be concise and clear. Please can you correct those sentences if you see a mistake? I guess that it's good enough, but I would like to be sure that I will not cause confusion to the players. Thank you for your help. Have a nice weekend ++

 

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Use arrow keys to move the cube (press down arrow key)

Rotate cube using arrow keys to change its direction

To solve a level, the gray dongle must hit the pink tile

The gray dongle can only touch blue and pink tiles

Collect all pearls in the level so as to enable goal

Once a black tile has been hit, it disappears

Obviously the shortest path is not always the best

Using a yellow gear, you can teleport yourself

Enable mechanics in order to open your way

If you do a bad move, but the previous tile has disappeared, you break game logic

A purple gear moves in the direction with which it has been hit

This one could be a little bit harder no?

Bypass a no-way-out situation climbing up some high tiles

There is always a way to reach your goal

Combine bridge movements so as to reach your goal

Climbing up some high tiles, make use of impossible geometry to open your way

 

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Just a little answer please - it's good enough or it's bad because you should write instead (bla bla bla)...

Aeleas liked it, but I don't know exactly what it means. Thank you ++

 

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"You will break game logic, whenever you do a bad move when the previous tile has disappeared"

 

I would personally put it this way...  I can't say that this is correct 100 percent correct as i'm not a native speaker myself :I

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Ok. Thank you GeneralCookie. I really appreciate your help ++

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